| CREATIVE WRITING AND VALUES
EDUCATION
By Alexandra Ch. Couloubaritsis, PhD
(Ponencia del I ENCUENTRO EUROPEO DE
EDUCACIÓN EN VALORES - "Más allá de las palabras / Beyond Words".
Linares-Martos (Spain), Noviembre 2000.)
1. A Framework of Procedures
Reading, writing, speaking and listening are all interrelated, so it is advisable to
use them as integrated areas. Within this "Values Education and Creative Writing
Program", texts will be treated as a motivating factor which will trigger, long
discussions, reflections, exchange of thoughts and ideas within a group and/or between
groups of students.
Reading Texts
Before reading motivating texts, give a purpose of reading to your students. One
way to accomplish that is by posing guiding interpretation questions. These questions will
form the basis of a discussion that may follow, which, in its turn, will provide material
for writing and producing texts.
In this session I will use texts based on the social values "Money" and
"Human Relationships". Through these texts I will present the following writing
techniques:
- Argumentation
- Free Writing
- Showing vs Telling (Zoom in and Zoom out)
A. Money
PRE-READING INTERPRETATION QUESTIONS
- What values do the words of the following two songs express?
- What do they tell us about the songwriter?
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Cant Bye Me Love Ill buy you a diamond
ring, my friend,
If it makes you feel alright.
Ill get you anything, my friend,
If it makes feel alright,
For I dont care too much for money,
For money cant buy me love.
Cant buy me love,
Everybody tells me so,
Cant buy me love,
No, no, no, no!
Ill give you all Ive got to give,
If you say you love me too.
I may not have a lot to give,
But what Ive got Ill give to you,
For I dont care too much for money,
For money cant buy me love.
Cant buy me love,
Everybody tells me so,
Cant buy me love,
No, no, no, no!
Say you dont need no diamond ring,
And Ill be satisfied.
Tell me you want those kind of things,
That money just cant buy,
For I dont care too much for money,
For money cant buy me love.
Cant buy me love,
Everybody tells me so,
Cant buy me love,
No, no, no, no!
John Lennon and Paul McCartney
The Beatles, 1964 |
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Money The best things in life are free,
But you can keep them for the birds and bees
Give me money,
Thats what I want,
Give me money,
That s what I want.
Your loving can be a thrill,
But your loving dont pay me bills,
Now give me money,
Thats what I want,
Give me money,
Thats what I want.
Money dont get everything its true,
But what it dont get I cant use.
Now give me money,
Thats what I want
Give me money
Thats what I need.
Chuck Berry
Written byBradford and Crady, 1958 |
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AFTER-READING ACTIVITIES
- SURVEY: Conduct a survey in your class of people who feel happy with Chuck Berrys
song for their own lives, and those who dont.
- DEBATE: Discuss within your group and classify arguments against and arguments for the
statement: "You will be happy in this world if getting money is one of your main
values"
Take a long sheet of paper and stick on it, in two columns, cards with the arguments of
the opposite sides. Then give evidence to back up each argument. At the end provide
a final evaluation. This is the framework of an "Argumentation".
- SHARED-WRITING: Now, write as a team an essay with the same title
Exploring Argumentation
The ability to write argumentative texts is best developed and practiced in partner and
in small group discussions. Points to remember are:
- Give students many opportunities to express themselves orally and to share opinions
about the topic
- Stress the need to present the facts without distortion
- Stress the need to gather evidence to support an argument. It is not enough to
list the assertions without evidence or data to support them.
- Stress the need to have a definite point of view on an issue before attempting to write
a persuasive text.
- Different points of View: After reading a story ask children to retell it from a
different point of view, e.g. wolf, grandmother.
- Examining Persuasive Tactics: Ask children to collect advertisements and group them in
to categories (food ads, car ads etc). Students take one category per group and decide how
advertisements persuade people to buy products. Suggest they look for information that is
stated and that which is implied. Have them write their own advertisements.
- Direct Model: Use overhead projector to display the basic elements of argumentation by
using an article of the local newspaper e.g.
Title: "Dogs should not be aloud in the municipal park"
Paragraph 1(Thesis)
Paragraph 2 (Argument and Evidence for)
Paragraph 3 (Argument and Evidence against)
Paragraph 4 (Counter Argument and Evidence)
Paragraph5 (Summary and Conclusions)
B. Human Relationships
PRE-READING FOCUS ACTIVITIES:
- Listen carefully to the story. You can either write or draw your thoughts and feelings
about the characters while you listen (later on you can create a cartoon-story). (Free
Writing 10 min)
- What values do you think each character expresses?
[Use "dilemma situation" stories as the following to motivate argumentation
on subjects related to human relationships].
Once there was a girl named Abigail who was in love with a boy named Gregory. Gregory
had an unfortunate accident and broke his glasses. Abigail, being a true friend,
volunteered to take them to be repaired. But the repair shop was across the river, and
during a flash flood the bridge was washed away. Poor Gregory could see nothing without
his glasses, so Abigail was desperate to get across the river to the repair shop.
While she was standing forlornly on the bank of the river, clutching the broken glasses
in her hands, a boy named Sinbad glided by in a rowboat. She asked Sinbad if he would take
her across. He agreed to on the condition that while she was having the glasses repaired,
she would go to a nearby store and steal a transistor radio that he had been wanting.
Abigail refused to do this and went to see a friend named Ivan who had a boat.
When Abigail told Ivan her problem, he said he was too busy to help her out and
didnt want to be involved. Abigail, feeling that she had no other choice, returned
to Sinbad and told him she would agree to his plan.
When Abigail returned the repaired glasses to Gregory, she told him what she had had to
do. Gregory was so mad at what she had done he told her that he never wanted to see her
again.
At this point write down about:
- How do you think Abigail felt? Why?
- Can you predict her reactions?
- What would you have done if you were in her place?
AFTER READING ACTIVITIES
- Put a title in the story.
- Circle the words that express the feelings of each character. Use the feeling as a
starting point of an essay (e.g. Abigail was desperate to get across the river). Then zoom
in and try to express every tiny detail, in order to put more emphasis on the feelings
(e.g. She started screaming and crying. Finally, she fell on her knees and muttered to
herself
.). Or, zoom out to give the big picture, the surroundings (e.g. She
was alone in the forest. The earth felt soft under her knees and the leaves scattered
around gave a funny impression...)
- Rank these characters from "best" to "worst": Abigail, Gregory,
Sinbad, Ivan, Slug. Give reasons for your decisions.
- Focus on one of the characters and write the story from your own point of view.
- Discuss within each group and write an essay about:
"
being a true friend."
BE A CREATIVE POET
Answer the following questions and create a poem:
What if friendship was a landscape? Your favorite day of the week? A special food? A
piece of furniture? A loving toy? Your favorite color?
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